托福寫作常見病句分析（二）
2014-12-25 16:19:12留學網整理
11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
改進: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
改進: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
改進: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
改進: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
改進: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
16. Insgroupsto suit the needs of enteringsintoswork, students must grasp some technical skills.
改進: Insgroupsto meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
改進: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
改進: This knowledge will become part of you.
19. They cannot think clearly.
改進: They cannot think straight.
20. Money can improve their living standard.
改進: Money can improve their life.
