托福指南：作文寫作技巧及模板整理

　　新托福考試的最后一部分是“寫作”，要求考生寫2篇文章，第一篇叫做綜合寫作(Integrated writing)，讓考生用3分鐘時間先讀一篇約250字的文章，然后聽一段2分鐘關于對所讀內容的評論。再讓考生寫一篇150到225個字的文章。這篇文章的寫作滿分詳解及滿分模板作者早已給出。

　　第二篇作文叫“獨立寫作”，和筆考、機考均無兩樣，給定考生一熟悉的話題，讓考生在30分鐘內寫一篇300字的文章。典型的問法是：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One should never judge a person by external appearance. Use specific reasons and details to support you answer.不少同學又跟筆者要獨立寫作滿分詳解及滿分模板。實際上獨立寫作詳解和模板筆者在很多年前便給出了模板，但不知何故網上和筆者的電腦中再也尋不著。只有提起筆來結合筆者再次參加新托福考試的經驗給各位同學重新總結新托福獨立寫作模板和高分寫作技巧。

　　一、熟悉和理解新托福4大評分標準是高分關鍵

　　評分標準1：effectively addresses the writing topic and task.

　　要求考生有效地闡明主題，考生千萬不要跑題。從筆者的教學經驗看，考生全部跑題現象較少，但是局部跑題現象十分嚴重，這也是考生不能輕取高分的緣故。

　　評分標準2：well organized and well developed 邏輯條理清楚，發展充分。每次作者在講寫作時總是把它和閱讀相對照。各位考生要想拿到獨立寫作滿分必須真正理解“八股文”的結構，千萬不要寫中國式的“八股文”，而應寫出“美式八股文”。

　　評分標準3：uses specific details and examples to support you view 考生的論據一定要具體、明確，且對論點有支持作用，而不能空洞和泛泛而談。

　　評分標準4：displays language facility by demonstrating syntactic variety, word choice and idiom.(通過譴詞造句和習慣表達來展示語言的熟練程度)這一點是各位考生經常忽視, 迷惘和不清楚的一點。新托福作文占總分120分的30分。我們對大家的要求是在作文上花的時間既要少又要拿高分，至少28分。凡是想拿到28分甚至滿分以上的同學一定要注意此項評分標準。能用first千萬不要用firstly，能用finally千萬不要用last but not least. 不少同學花了很多功夫背這一外國人都不用的詞組，能用常用的詞千萬不要用偏詞，同時我們要熟練掌握ETS喜歡的5大語法結構和2種從句。

　　作文要不要寫?當然要寫，但我建議考生不要寫的太多，寫一篇要像一篇，最好讓行家改2-3篇。我曾經碰到一個學生把185篇中的184篇均寫了。拿給我看，結果同樣的錯誤在184篇均反復出現，讓我哭笑不得，一問才知說是老師這么教的。學托福需要勤奮，但像這種勤奮就等于浪費青春歲月。

　　作文要不要背?最好不要通篇背，可以背一些經典的句型。倘若真要背，一定要認準此篇作文是范文的情況下才能背。

　　這4個評分標準哪條更重要?這主要取決于考生對作文考分的期望值。若要考滿分，此4點均重要。千萬不能跑題，一跑題可就是0分了。考試費也就白交了。

　　二、新托福獨立寫作滿分模板

　　When it comes to the question of , different people might have different answers. In my view, I think that_________________ can , and . The reasons go as follows.

　　The main reason for my view is that .

　　First of all, Second,

　　Finally,

　　So, .

　　Another reason for my view is that .

　　On one hand, . For example,

　　. In addition, .

　　Finally, .

　　(分理由1) . (分理由2) .

　　In conclusion, based on the reasons I discussed above,(please rewrite the first paragraph in another way).

　　新托福寫作并不難，不管你中文寫作好還是不好，只要真正掌握了寫作方法和要求，再寫出3-5篇作文。考個滿分絕不是什么大驚小怪的事。越來越多同學來陽光學校學托福和托福寫作。關鍵原因是同學們在掌握了我們教的方法后一方面能從容應對寫作，更能在寫作中取得高分或滿分的成績!

　　每個人都會說work hard and work smart.但大多數人均沒有做到，至少在備戰新托福及新托福寫人上沒做到。

　　托福作文模板推薦之一

　　A or B

　　Depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, we find that some people hold the idea of A meanwhile others prefer to B, from my point of view, it is more advisable to chose A rather than B. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.

　　The main reason for my propensity for A is that___________________________.就理由進行解釋_____________________.For instance,____________________

　　Another reason can be seen by every one is that____________________________.就理由進行解釋___________________For example,____________________

　　The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because_____________________________

　　Although I agree that there may be a couple of advantages of B, I feel that the disadvantages are more obvious. Such as________________.

　　In a word, ________________________________________________.So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to A.

　　托福作文模板推薦之二

　　A or B

　　將原題復述___________________________________________When faced with the decision of A of B, quite a few would deem that______________________, but others, in contrast, believe A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. Among countless factors which influence -A/-B, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.

　　The main reason for my propensity fo _________is that___________________

　　The second reason can be seen by every person that________.

　　In addition, these reason are also usable when we consider that_________.

　　There are some disadvantages in____________________另一種觀點的缺點__________.

　　In a word, _____________重復觀點句并縮寫理由__________________.Takingsintosaccount of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that___________.

　　托福作文模板推薦之三

　　單一命題式

　　The answer of this statement depends on your own experience and life style. In my point view, buying computers is as important as, if not more important than, buying books. So it is sagacious to ____________.Among countless factors which influence the choice, these are three conspicuous aspects as follows.

　　The main reason for my propensity for__________is that____________.

　　Another reason can be seen by every person is that________________.

　　Futhermore,______________.

　　In short,_________________復述前文中的理由______________.

　　托福作文模板推薦之四

　　agree or disagree

　　Some people argue as if it is a general truth that a _____________________________.But to be frank, I cannot agree with them. There are numerous reasons why I hold no confidence on them, and I would explore only a few primary ones here.

　　The main problem with this argument is that it is ignorant o the basic fact that______________解釋本段中心___________.

　　Another reason why I disagree with the above statement is that I believe that______________.

　　What is more, some students are interested in____________.

　　In a word, ________________.

　　托福作文模板推薦之五

　　A or B

　　Some people prefer to A. others believe B. When faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that______________, but others, in contrast , deem A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. There are numerous reasons why___________, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here. The main reason why I agree with the above statement, however, is that_____________________. Take___________as example, ______________. There is another factor that deserves some words here. Such as ________________________.

　　Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we consider that______________.(exmaples:___________).

　　From the above you might got idea that I agree______________.(repeat the above three reason____________).So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to _______________.

　　托福作文模板推薦之六

　　Agree or disagree

　　Some people prefer to A, others believe B, Nowadays some may hold the opinion that ________________, but others have a negative attitude. As far as I am concerned, I agree/disagree that_______________. MY arguments for this point are listed as follows.

　　One of the primary causes is that_______________________.

　　Examples_______________.

　　But there is a fruther more subtle point we must consider. Examples.

　　What is more_______________. Examples___________

　　General speaking, __________. Recongizing the fact that _______________should drive us to conclude that______________.

　　托福作文模板推薦之七

　　A or B

　　In my point of view, A is as important as, if not more important than B. So it is sagacious to choose A. Among count less factors which influence A. there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.

　　The above point is certainly true if A is considered. For exmaple,___________________

　　Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that A is better than B. For instance,_______________

　　It would probably not be too kindly disposed to the idea that B is not important . B________也好_________.

　　In a word, to choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of B, and neglect hte genuinely good aspects of A. For the reasons presented above, I strongly commit to the notion that A, but not B.

　　托福作文模板推薦之八

　　A or B

　　When faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that A, but others, in contrast, deem B as the premier choice and that is also my point. This quite different view is based on the propensity of following points. We may looksintosevery possible reason, however, fore most reason for B is ____________________. For example, ______________.

　　Also, ________________________.

　　This is arbitray to judge B according only to the excuse I mentioned in the above paragraph.

　　Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we consider that________________. Admittedly, __________________A也有好的地方______________.By he same token, however, ______________B更好____________.Takingsintosaccount of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that_____________.

　　托福作文模板推薦之九

　　A or B

　　When it comes to______________, Nevertheless, in my part, I prefer A rather than B as my inclination. My arguments for this point are listed as follows. I agree with the statement that _________without reservation since___________.

　　Naturally___________.It can be given a concrete example__________. A more essential factor why I advocate the argument of __________is that. Obviously ________________.Take the case of a thing that____________. Futhermore, what is worth noticing fact is that ________________. This demonstrates the undeniable fact that__________________. Of course, choosing B also has advantages to some extent,_______________此處論述B的1-2優點___________.But if all these factors are contemplated, the advantages of A carry more weight than those of B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that_____________.

　　托福作文模板推薦之十

　　____________改寫并復述題目____________. There may be by one or two disadvantages to ___________________; however, I believe that there are far more advantages. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.

　　First of all, perhaps one disadvantages to____________is that______________.For instance, __________________. Another drawback to _____________involves the possibility that____________. For example, ____________. Even though there may be one or two disadvantages to____________, the advantages far outweigh them. The main reason for my propensity for __________is that _________. For exmaple_____________.

　　Another reason for my inclination for _____________ is that _________________. For example, _________________.

　　In a word, in spite of the fact that there may be a couple of disadvantages to _____________, I feel that the advantages are more obvious___________.重復優點__________.Takingsintosaccount of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that _____________.

　　托福作文模板推薦之十一

　　A or B

　　____________改寫并復述題目____________.The advantages of B carry more weight than those of A. There are numerous reasons why __________, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here. One of the primary cause is that_______________________.

　　What is also worth noticing fact is that_____________________.

　　Futhermore, ________________________.

　　Although I agree that there may be couple of disadvantages to_________________.I fell that the advantages are more obvious_____________. _______________, Given the factors I have just outlined, I can only say that___________________.

　　托福作文模板推薦之十二

　　A or B

　　____________改寫并復述題目____________.When faced withe decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that ___________, but others, in contrast, deem A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. Among countless factors which influence _________, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows. The main reason for my propensity for ________________ is that _____________. Another reason can be seen by every person is that___________________. The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because ________________________.

　　In a word, ___________________. Takingsintosaccount of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that ____________________.

　　托福作文模板推薦之十三

　　A or B

　　From my point of view, it is advisable to choose A rather than B. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.

　　The main reason for my propensity for ____________________ is that ________________.

　　There is another factor that deserves some words here.

　　In a word, ________________________. While it is true that the argument, I disagree hold a little bit of water, I think_______________.

　　托福作文模板推薦之十四

　　agree or disagree

　　Nowadays, some may hold the opinion that ____________________. But others have a negative attitude. As far as I am concerned, I agree that ____________. My arguments for this point are listed as follows. I agree with the statement that ______________________without reservation since ________________.

　　Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that________________.

　　In a word, _________________________. Takingsintosaccount of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that__________.

　　托福作文模板推薦之十五

　　agree or disagree

　　Some people argue as if it is a general truth that a _____________________________.But to be frank, I cannot agree with them. There are numerous reasons why I hold no confidence on them, and I would explore only a few primary ones here.

　　The main problem with this argument is that it is ignorant o the basic fact that______________解釋本段中心___________.

　　Another reason why I disagree with the above statement is that I believe that______________.

　　What is more, some students are interested in____________.

　　In a word, ________________.